Poor goat humor

Hello friends; Especially friends who are kind and don't reveal. My story is more fantasy and humorous, but humor and reality are mixed together.
The story of Big Daddy's Donkey was presented to my friends in two parts. Please guide me to make my story better and combine humor and bitter truths. I hope you will always enjoy my story and my friends.
Jalil was a lazy boy at school and smart for technical work. He lived in Baba Bozorg village. He was a sharp boy. It was from these words and he had given them all to Ga; One day he came to look for me in the village garden; Let's be naughty; There was a very big garden that was full of Portugal and apples and different kinds of fruit could be found in this garden; we went to the garden from our usual place and went to drink fruit, we ate a lot of fruit and Jalil told us to go to the other side of the garden. I ate it, I accepted, and we went. I saw the sound of two Afghans coming. I told Jalil that there were louder sounds. They want to calculate it. At that time, there was no phone to shoot a movie.